Flist, help?

[gargoylekitty]

I've been staring at this too long so, other than the one hand(should I lengthen that arm? open the hand?), does anything look really off? I think the face is a little wonky? Any advice?


I've been up awhile so I'm going to go take a nap.

Comments

[scdsam.livejournal.com]

After much staring, I think the mouth might be on a slightly different angle than the eyes (line of teeth is tilted up on the right more than the eyes are?). I don't know if that's right, but that's what it looks like to me.

I really like how the tail is so up close and out of focus, btw. LOVE. Her hair and the tiny dots on her face are gorgeous too.

The arm looks a wee bit short, but with the perspective it's at that's kinda inevitable without tons and tons of shading. The thumb is maybe odd angle though--should be more pointing towards the other fingers and slightly on top?

The overall pose is just rockin. Good stuff.

[gargoylekitty.livejournal.com]

Heh, thanks. I'm pretty sure you're right about the mouth. Open mouth poses are definitely not my strong point. Same with arm placement for that matter, lol. Hmmm... *goes off to play with it more*