Flist, help?

[gargoylekitty]

I've been staring at this too long so, other than the one hand(should I lengthen that arm? open the hand?), does anything look really off? I think the face is a little wonky? Any advice?


I've been up awhile so I'm going to go take a nap.

Comments

[derbysinner.livejournal.com]

it's really really cool looking and I love the tail! The only thing I would say is maybe her arms need to be a little more muscular, since she's a cat and my cats are pretty buff - well, one of them is, the other one is kind of chunky... but that's beside the point.

[gargoylekitty.livejournal.com]

Thanks and yes, muscles! Definitely a good idea.

[bluefall.livejournal.com]

Yeah, I second the comment that the arms seem a bit scrawny. Particularly in the right wrist.

You might give her that cute little bit of kitty-nose that Justiniano and Lopresti are fond of, too, if you're looking for something to tweak in the face.

[tomecko.livejournal.com]

Wow, this looks great! Hmm... if you're looking for something to change in her face, the eyebrows could be pulled down farther towards her eyes.

[gargoylekitty.livejournal.com]

Yeah, I think I moved her eyes at some point though never bothered with the eyebrows. Thanks.

[be-prepared.livejournal.com]

I think the forearm could use some bulking and a bit of elongating the arm. I'm really not bothered by the face.

[sykoryoko.livejournal.com]

I think (her) left arm should be a bit longer. The upper part is fine, but the bottom part's a little short.

I REALLY like how you did the tail and her hair. I think her face is fine, but idk that's just me. :3

[scdsam.livejournal.com]

After much staring, I think the mouth might be on a slightly different angle than the eyes (line of teeth is tilted up on the right more than the eyes are?). I don't know if that's right, but that's what it looks like to me.

I really like how the tail is so up close and out of focus, btw. LOVE. Her hair and the tiny dots on her face are gorgeous too.

The arm looks a wee bit short, but with the perspective it's at that's kinda inevitable without tons and tons of shading. The thumb is maybe odd angle though--should be more pointing towards the other fingers and slightly on top?

The overall pose is just rockin. Good stuff.

[gargoylekitty.livejournal.com]

Heh, thanks. I'm pretty sure you're right about the mouth. Open mouth poses are definitely not my strong point. Same with arm placement for that matter, lol. Hmmm... *goes off to play with it more*

[r-e-a-f.livejournal.com]

As a non-artist the only thing that catches my eye is the tail covering the forearm. It just looks weird to me and looks like she's missing part of her arm.

Other than that, great drawing. I especially like the perspective on the tail.

[spankingfemme.livejournal.com]

I love the gesture! And the tail coming out at you is very cool! Great feel of volume on to! :P That being said, as for the arm, I would lengthen it and beef up the forearm a bit. As for the face, I don't think it looks bad at all, maybe make the pupils a little wider? Looks awesome to me :)

[uncanny-rman.livejournal.com]

I think th epicture looks fine as it is.

Mmm, Cheetah...